Max’s schoolwork

I just pulled this out from Max’s bag. This is the paper in its entirety, emphasis mine though:\
I was in kindergarden [sic]. Later, I went to Hawaii. Technecly [sic], I was going to the Hawaiian Islands. I stayed for two weeks. They were the best 2 weeks of my life. We lived in a house where we got dirty feet if we went barefoot. Before we got to rent the house, we went to a place. My brother and I went to a playground. On one of my last few days there I went to McDonald’s (which I only regret only because of the recipe) and later, I left. It was great. I wish it could happen again.

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2 responses to “Max’s schoolwork”

  1. Becky Avatar

    I love kids’ writing samples! This was good to know that if we just wait to go to Hawaii when Paul is in Kindergarten, he will actually appreciate it. I like the dirty feet part. . . shows how very clean your own house is if he’s used to going barefoot without getting dirty feet usually. Cute!

  2. The Mighty Tim Avatar
    The Mighty Tim

    Natural born storyteller.